もし、恋が見えたなら 1

Almost bite-sized story; cute art-style; cute story; cute, originally executed premise. Only If I were a sucker for cute... But the premise itself is executed well beyond what one would would normally expect. Among three volumes, it is, however, underdeveloped. There is plenty of room to utilize it, however maybe not in this piece. As it is, it is finished, and should stay finished. Even if it feels unfinished.

I cannot imagine a universe where this title would drag much longer and did not degenerate. So the length is quite well on the spot. But apart from a good premise there is little I can say. It is well drawn. The story holds itself, but only for a romance-slice-of-life standards.

Language is as one might expect. Timeline jumps sometimes but rarely. Characters are distinct enough. Plot is not hard to follow.

Story line is wrapped up. But to me it seems like the premise was not developed fully. It played only a minor part in the whole story. Ending might have been a little rushed, but still fine-okay.

I whined a little, but I think anyone could see from the cover and from the sample chapters if this is ones jam. This jam is at most okay for me — I can eat it with some bread, but I would perish if it was the only thing I ate.