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Unrealistic, but decent writing style
Overall: if you don't mind an unrealistic take on the subject matter and/or you already like this author, it's probably worth a read. There were some ways the book fell short for me, but at the same time, I felt compelled to keep reading, and it got me more interested in his earlier works (I'm already reading 私の初恋相手がキスしてた anyway). It's probably a good pick for language learning, tho I'm not sure if particularly recommend it otherwise.
Story: in terms of the emotional side, romantic development, etc, I'd probably give this book a 4 or so. The characters are enjoyable, and the romantic development is well structured.
In terms of realism and use of setting, I'd give this a 2. The characters are not remotely believable, especially the younger one, as well as most of the supporting characters (to the extent that they're relevant at all). I think that was a wasted opportunity, especially since the web novel does apparently present the very real possibility of the teacher getting caught and in trouble. Here you're reminded that she's married, and that she could get in trouble, but it feels like lip service. Somehow her husband apparently doesn't think that anything weird is going on (or knows and doesn't care?), the teachers around her don't, some of the other students do (but somehow that doesn't translate to any adult finding out), etc. The leads are not exactly subtle about things either.
The only supporting characters who felt kinda realistic were the girl's trash mother, and Sora (who is a pretty amoral, irresponsible adult, but is also a supportive friend to the younger girl). As an aside, Sora is the protagonist of the author's previous series I mentioned above, where she is younger, and had a rather troubled home life. Apparently that novel is somehow related to 安達としまむら | L30 as well.
One thing that's really missing is the student's perspective, which we only get in the final section, in the form of a greatly expanded version of a certain scene alluded to in section 1. I get why the author put it there, but personally it felt really jarring and unnecessary, coming right after the end of the story. I also thought the ending point of the story (section 2) was a bit anticlimactic and unrealistic. One thing I did find interesting was that you see both the teacher's reframing/justifying the situation to herself, and also her awareness (and to some extent guilt) that she's doing the very wrong thing, at certain moments. I did find Sora to be pretty interesting as well.
Of the two other age gaps I've read (〆切前には百合が捗る | L28 and ひげひろ | L27), the leads in those series felt infinitely more realistic. ひげひろ (which is not a romance, but has some romantic tension) has the exact same age gap as this book, and the leads' thoughts, behavior, awkwardness, etc matched their age and social position a million times more. 〆切 has a smaller age gap (16 & 22), but the characters are very well developed, and the younger one especially feels her age.
Language: the writing style itself is not bad. At times it's a little unclear when you're in inner monologue vs when external things and actions are being described, but setting that aside, it's easy enough to follow. The author definitely has a lot of particular quirks or phrasings that he likes, and those are repeated frequently, so in terms of picking up vocab and language patterns, it's actually a pretty good choice. The pacing is usually fairly even, and despite having lots of inner monologue, it doesn't really feel like redundant info dumping, the way that a lot of fantasy LNs do. Despite the story flaws, the writing style itself was enjoyable and productive.