April 20, 2025

ok

Story: The characters and their situation have potential. But I thought it was a bit boring, with most of the drama being in the later part. And the some if that drama and backstory feels a bit off to me. Like it doesn't fit it is too much too late.

I feel the little kids (the protagonist siblings) could have had more of a personality rather than just being cute.

I might come back to the second volume in the future, or maybe not.

Language: Large parts of the story is slice of life stuff. But there are some parts that are a bit more difficult. There is technical vocabulary related to creating manga. And then there is the sci Fi plot of the manga they are creating.

Content warning:

Rens parents are negligent and abusive. The abuse is only in one chapter and involves beating.
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