October 18, 2023

The story is fun but the writing style is really annoying!

I really enjoyed the story, had some good laughs as well, but the writing style is the worst I've read yet. Based on 2 volumes I finished currently, there's 2 problems:

  • Repetition. The author keeps adding different point of views and repeating what we already know instead of proceeding the story. If it was once or twice, maybe as a special chapter at the end, that'd be cool, I really like it when changing the point of view continues the story instead, unfortunately it's not like that here.
  • It feels like a monologue! (mostly for other characters PoV) The few dialogues are there as a bonus, because really when PoV changes you're there to hear the internal monologue of the characters.

Despite all that I'm willing to read some more, the characters are very good and there's a lot of potential to the story. It's also good as an entry level to orange level books (27+)

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