January 30, 2025

Slow and unresolved

I liked the beginning and watching the characters in the club work on themselves. The last 40% was just too boring and YA-coded. And none of the following were explained: Why does the male MC think he recognizes the female MC when they first meet? How does the female MC's magic technically work? Is it an optical illusion or does she literally rewrite space? If she rewrote space, why did the people she rescued from the upper floors of the mall not fall down and die? What is the origin of the female MC's magic? Why does she lose it when she becomes an adult? It felt extremely lazy that the author dropped in that she will lose her magic when she reaches adulthood and said that it was written at the end of her grandmother's letter, WHICH WE READ IN THE FIRST 20% and it was missing that. I just have no tolerance for this kind of lazy YA with unexplained fantasy elements just for the vibes.

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