November 25, 2024
I didn't find this as interesting as the premise made it sound. The first chapter has that 'ugh I HATE HER' 'ohoho sounds like you like her!' 'I totally do not!!!' cliche sort of dialogue, which is a trope I dislike a lot. The second chapter is totally disconnected from the first and third, which are connected, which was a strange decision; it was cute and fun at first, but I found it tedious by the last few pages. This also means that the story of the witch and the witch hunter is even shorter than the page count suggests, and it ended up feeling underdeveloped to me even though I like a good enemies-to-lovers.
